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So as for my rating, this would go 8/10 -1. I got confused on the cross-guard part of what he's holding and thought it was a claw finge...

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Anthony.A
Artist | Hobbyist | Traditional Art
Philippines
I just started sketching recently this year and hopefully there will be more to upload this upcoming year 2017. I'm looking forward to everyone's thoughts on how I'm progressing.

See you all again soon.
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I just gotten my hands on a 48 color set which I'm still trying to learn on how to use them properly. TY FaberCastell
Vibrant Morning
Sorry about the quality of the image though. I'll soon get my hands on a new camera to get a better shot and quality.
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So yes, I had a hard time with combining different colors and shades to make this art work and fun to look at. Also some crossovers like one of my phone game apps which is "Neko Atsume" and it looks OK in the end. Hope you guys like it <3
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If only I have a decent camera or some place where there's a scanner, I could have uploaded my recent artworks but unfortunately there's none ;w;

I may as well continue my sketchworks and hope to upload them soon.
Sketchworks:

1. Mint: Chime Maiden of Icezel(Finished)
2. (FanArt for Tyson Tan)
3. Morphona: The last Queen
4. Arka: Keeper of the Archives

...aand a lot more chibi and furry creatures to add soon and also some cleanup in my noob-looking gallery (~ = w = )~
MINT (WIP)
So yeah, Mint here is one of my alternative but final work from Pluff (this is still WIP though). As of the history of how I worked on her, it took me 4 months. Why? I started doing art since last year on October and then I stopped uploading because I want my art to be good, unique and something that I enjoy working on so I started going though a lot of sketching tutorials ranging from anatomy, perspective, coloring and shading and also adding my tastes in it.
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This is a fan art for one of my favorite and inspired artist, Napkit . If you guys are interested in fluffy creatures, you can check out his works :))
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1st month: Anatomy and body structure training.
2nd month: Image training and clothes composition.
3rd month: Color training and shading.
4th month: Personalized character making and process.

The final work will feature a suitable background, an introductory story and also the scanned version to make it look clean. Please tell me on how I'm progressing so far; your comments, suggestions and thoughts are deeply appreciated! :meow:
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So as for my rating, this would go 8/10

-1. I got confused on the cross-guard part of what he's holding and thought it was a claw finger. I figured that it was the blur and blend of the blue from the finger that made it look like its part of the body.

-2. Highlight; Some parts of the body seem to stand out more than the actual part of the body or thing -- like the left knee, it stands out more than the surging sword and also the right shoulder, the highlights didn't really match the image since the light is located on the right side and darkness is on the left.

Other comments? Just be careful on where you add the lights on the body and also try not to blend the objects together to avoid confusion.

Your works are very interesting so keep it up!
Chapter 1: The End, the start, the beginning.

    When I was still a small kid, I loved to imagine a lot of things from fantasy weapons (specially swords) to Knights with a mix of techno. I always wonder what I want to base my art from because I was thinking of being able to do Manga characters but then I thought that it wasn't the one that made my motivation burning with passion so I searched for something else. For some time later, I stopped to sketch and draw and thought of just watching anime on TV, reading manga and playing online games on the computer but I soon realize that, looking at the real world, "What's my talent?". I thought about it over and over and I stopped to think again. I just continued to go along with my life as time passes by and it has been more than 3 years since I stopped to draw something on clear paper until one day my cousin came to my house and asked if I can draw a scenery for him about "Pollution", it was his upcoming project to be submitted on the FOLLOWING DAYDisbelief . I asked him why he's just saying this now? He explained that he was working on it but the images are as bad as the Scribbles fro the cartoon series "Foster home for imaginary friends". That made me laugh but I'm not going to show a single smirk on my faceLa la la la ; hold it in Vex, HOLD IT! So after that I took his offer and drew what I can about pollution. I started with panels, just like in mangas, and then started off with egg heads (lmao)Floating  with bubble dialogues and a simple background to fill in some effects. I was able to finish it on time and I never thought that making such a simple project with characters could be so much fun to do and then something really fuzzy started to wiggle in my heart like something I want to do often and improve it and then my mom came next to me while I'm holding my cousin's project and said "Your father was once an architect, he loved to draw buildings and also art projects. I see that you got his talent". I realized that drawing/sketching was part of who I am and what I'm very passionate about.

    On the next following day, I grabbed my laptop and chatted with my artistic friend Mori Meow :3 (This is her name when she's being addressed as an artist) to ask some recommendations on what to buy for noob-artist kit (lol). So she told me to buy Faber Castell pencils, a set of 48 colors Stare , and also Faber Castell led pencils, eraser, sharpener and and a 0.5 or 0.7 UniPin ink pen (for outlining). Last thing that she recommended me is "what kind of art would you like to base your work on?" and again I'm stuck at square one Oh Noes! . I have no idea what I should draw! Mori recommended me to search for an artist in deviantart.com and so I did Sherlock Holmes. I have searched everywhere from Emo, Gothic, Knights, Cyborgs and other futuristic stuff but no luck. I kept on searching still until I found TysonTan's work and instantly fell in love with every art he madeLove ! I've never been fired up for such a long time and its going to be a tough road for me from here but I'm going to do my best to improve :happybounce: .


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Cutesia Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the fave but I'd appreciate if you didn't critique my work because that's not what I'm looking for here on Deviantart, I didn't want a critique.

I work better noticing mistakes myself, and I ask my boyfriend for what he thinks about it, I don't mean to sound rude in any way I'm just very sensitive so I don't like being critiqued, I know you were only trying to offer advice though!
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VexusArzxis Featured By Owner Edited Apr 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its not a problem at all. I'm a part of Project Comment where we usually critique artworks of fellow artists to express the points of their works and giving detailed info that they are not aware of themselves. If its not to your style then I understand and also you were not rude at all, don't worry about it too much my friend :meow:. Keep up your cute works!
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Cutesia Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the watch ;u;
Have a sweet day~!
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VexusArzxis Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You deserve it :dummy:
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Wisteria-Dragon Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2017  Student General Artist
I love your gallery! Keep doing your good work >-<
  
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VexusArzxis Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe... well, my gallery isn't much to look at atm but I'm currently having a lot of stuff to do so I can't upload as much but I'll do the best I can to keep you guys updated.

And thank you for the watch :meow: I'll be fixing up my gallery soon next moth with all of my works to upload. Stay tuned :3
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Y2Jinstien Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Student Writer
You favorited my Adventures of Alice story a while back, and if you're interested, I made a second Adventures of Alice story.
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VexusArzxis Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please link me. I wanna know what's next on the story line <3
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Y2Jinstien Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2017  Student Writer
y2jinstien.deviantart.com/art/…

Here you go. Hope you enjoy it.
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Aenea-Jones Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi! :wave:
I've come here to give you a llama, but it seems I already did that at some point ^^;
Oh well, have a nice day then! I'll leave you here some soothing scenery that may give you a good feeling! :D

Take a walk with me II by Aenea-Jones   Idyll IX by Aenea-Jones
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